English Help

[Will]

I have to write a paper analyzing martin luther king i have a dream speech..and one of the topics im supposed to go over is if there where any flaws to it..i was thinking about putting that" despite kings great success in writing the paper there are still leaders and American citizens who oppose African Americans"....anyone else know of something else that would seem more accurate

thanks

[rmaciasl]

looks for it at 123essays.com
lol

[Will]

couldnt find anything...thanks rmac

[Toronto_Mike]

is this an English paper or a History paper? Big difference if you want to state the facts and if you want to find writing flaws.

[Will]

English..im analyzing the paper and looking for flaws in the speech (not grammatical) flaws like the speech failed to do something..etc

[Toronto_Mike]

hmmm well have you found any discrepancies with his thesis and his body of the speech?

[Will]

its hard to tell..i will read it again

[Toronto_Mike]

eh i guess you can talk about future tense, present tense and what not. AFter all it was a "Vision" you can see if those ideals have been carried out today.

[Toronto_Mike]

you might want to wait for other people's opinion. Those with better literature skills than I, haha.

[Will]

i was thinking that thst one of the flaws could be the fact that racism is still around today..but im sure there is a better answer

[Big Pimpin]

Maybe you can focus on not neccesarily the flaws but more about the speech being unrealistic in today's society as racism will never end.

[Will]

Originally Posted by big pimpin

Maybe you can focus on not neccesarily the flaws but more about the speech being unrealistic in today's society as racism will never end.

smartest response yet..no offense others thanks bigpimp

[Big Pimpin]

Here to help Will....GL on da paper

[TigerCat_Tania]

http://www.cycad.com/cgi-bin/pinc/ap...lagiarism.html

Hope this helps

[Big Pimpin]

Will......


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