Skippy This Is More Easy

[rmaciasl]

Identify the Fragments (F), or Run-on sentences [R] in the following. If the sentence is correct, write [C]. If the sentence is incorrect, correct it.

1. __C___ Her face was etched with a deep tan, her eyes were a little bloodshot from hours of looking at the sun reflecting off the water. (falta señalar el run-on sentence)

2. __C___ Cancún is one of the youngest towns in Mexico, nevertheless, it already has a large population.

3. _____ As well as be taken care of when he or she is sick.

4. _____ Bet on the Yankees, they are almost always in the World Series. (falta corregirlo y señalar el run-on sentence)

5. ____ Because these provide them with food. (falta corregirlo)

6. __C___No matter where she went, she felt like suspect under surveillance.

7. _____ Rosa simply turned to her brother; he mistook her action and ducked.

8. _____ Mayas living in parts of the countries of Mexico and Guatemala.

9. _____ And can be eaten at any time of the year.

10. _____ Teresa’s tennis racquet was the perfect size for serving, net play and backhand strokes. (ya la corregí pero falta señalar el run-on sentence)

11. _____ All men, women, and children take part in the traditional Posada in Mexico.

12. _____ Sign up for the TOEFL even if you don’t believe you will score well.

13. _____ Although this process is expensive.

14. _____ There is practically no way to break this toy. Except for the way Jorge whacked it.

15. _____ Adrian turned on all the lights in the house, Carmen never even stirred even though the house was bright as midday.

16. _____ Is very effective and necessary in preserving the quality of food.

17. _____ Pistachio nuts, which are grown in California, shipping to New York for processing, claim labor is cheaper there.

18. _____ For hours he complained that he hungry, although he still could not bring himself to eat the soup.

[Back Country]

bro, you just started a 'proper english' thread and didnt use proper english in the title.

'more easy'

way to throw him off, may take him off his game... if you can call it that.

[skippy]

Identify the Fragments (F), or Run-on sentences [R] in the following. If the sentence is correct, write [C]. If the sentence is incorrect, correct it.

1. __C___ Her face was etched with a deep tan, her eyes were a little bloodshot from hours of looking at the sun reflecting off the water. (falta señalar el run-on sentence)

1. __R___ Her face was etched with a deep tan. Her eyes were a little bloodshot from hours of looking at the sun reflecting off the water. (falta señalar el run-on sentence)

2. __C___ Cancún is one of the youngest towns in Mexico, nevertheless, it already has a large population.

2. __R___ Cancún is one of the youngest towns in Mexico; nevertheless, it already has a large population.

3. _____ As well as be taken care of when he or she is sick.

3. __F__ Parents are taken care of when he or she is sick.

4. _____ Bet on the Yankees, they are almost always in the World Series. (falta corregirlo y señalar el run-on sentence)

4. __R___ Bet on the Yankees; they are almost always in the World Series. (falta corregirlo y señalar el run-on sentence)

5. ____ Because these provide them with food. (falta corregirlo)

5. __F__ People provide them with food. (falta corregirlo)

6. __C___No matter where she went, she felt like suspect under surveillance.

6. __R___She felt like a suspect under surveillance; no matter where she went.

7. _____ Rosa simply turned to her brother; he mistook her action and ducked.

7. __C__ Rosa simply turned to her brother; he mistook her action and ducked.

8. _____ Mayas living in parts of the countries of Mexico and Guatemala.

8. __R___ There are Mayas living in parts of Mexico and Guatemala.

9. _____ And can be eaten at any time of the year.

9. __F___ Papayas can be eaten at any time of the year.

10. _____ Teresa’s tennis racquet was the perfect size for serving, net play and backhand strokes. (ya la corregí pero falta señalar el run-on sentence)

10. __C___ Teresa’s tennis racquet was the perfect size for serving, net play and backhand strokes. (ya la corregí pero falta señalar el run-on sentence)

11. _____ All men, women, and children take part in the traditional Posada in Mexico.

11. __R___ Everyone takes part in the traditional Posada in Mexico.

12. _____ Sign up for the TOEFL even if you don’t believe you will score well.

12. __R___ Sign up for the TOEFL; even though you don’t believe you will score well.

13. _____ Although this process is expensive.

13. __F___ The process is expensive.

14. _____ There is practically no way to break this toy. Except for the way Jorge whacked it.

14. __R___ There is practically no way to break this toy; except for the way Jorge whacked it.

15. _____ Adrian turned on all the lights in the house, Carmen never even stirred even though the house was bright as midday.

15. __R___ Adrian turned on all the lights in the house. Even though the house was bright as midday, Carmen never even stirred.

16. _____ Is very effective and necessary in preserving the quality of food.

16. __F___ Freezing is very effective and necessary in preserving the quality of food.

17. _____ Pistachio nuts, which are grown in California, shipping to New York for processing, claim labor is cheaper there.

17. __R___ Pistachio nuts are grown in California. They are shipped to New York for cheaper processing.

18. _____ For hours he complained that he hungry, although he still could not bring himself to eat the soup.

18. __R___ Although he complained for hours that he is hungry, he still could not bring himself to eat the soup.

[skippy]

I did these rather quickly so you should go over them carefully.

[jaypasco]

this is 4th greade shit even for mexicans

[lakersmetsjets]

Originally Posted by jaypasco

this is 4th greade shit even for mexicans

LMFAO

[skippy]

Originally Posted by jaypasco

this is 4th greade shit even for mexicans

What is GREADE????

Do you mean GREED???

Gee JPa.....how does it feel to be dumber than a 4th grade Mexican???

[rmaciasl]

Originally Posted by Back Country

bro, you just started a 'proper english' thread and didnt use proper english in the title.

'more easy'

way to throw him off, may take him off his game... if you can call it that.

now u know why i ask for help